Pitch Feedback

As a group, we presented our pitch to the class and they offered some constructive feedback to help our video:

• it would be improved if we affected things that were in our real life footage, for example the audience willl be able to see a bush from the window, we could affect with anamation to make it seem sinister, like the song.
• look at more inspirational videos such as the car advert which combines the two nicely as well as the becks beer ad '4 steps' which also does this.

we will take this on board when continuing with our project